Posted by Rich on August 22, 2002 at 09:57:51:
In Reply to: Re: This feeling posted by Rich on August 22, 2002 at 09:56:47:
::Hey, Rich, welcome back! Just keep writing... let it flow.
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Keep a diary. that helps me. carry around a walkman that
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records so that you don't lose your ideas when they come.
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And keep singing!! I added four more lines to the verse. i
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think it should have four more after that and then back to the
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chorus. I generally make the first verse longer than the 2nd
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verse, but there are no rules.
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:::I'm sitting Here, all alone
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And somethings not right
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But Im feelin better now
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That ur in my life
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I was all by myself
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But you were there to help
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When i was out of place
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u put this smile on my face
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Chourus
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This feeling deep inside of me
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it opens up my horizons
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and it lets me see
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Everything, good or bad
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And in the end
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I'm just glad
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That your here
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To make this feeling appear
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I'm standing here by myself
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But I'm your really here
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And it makes me feel better
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Cause i know in a few hours
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That you'll be there
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:Chorus
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