Re: This feeling


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Posted by Rich on August 22, 2002 at 09:56:47:

In Reply to: Re: This feeling posted by stefanie on August 22, 2002 at 09:52:40:

:Hey, Rich, welcome back!  Just keep writing... let it flow.  
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Keep a diary.  that helps me.  carry around a walkman that
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records so that you don't lose your ideas when they come.  
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And keep singing!!  I added four more lines to the verse.  i
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think it should have four more after that and then back to the
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chorus.  I generally make the first verse longer than the 2nd
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verse, but there are no rules.
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:::I'm sitting Here, all alone
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And somethings not right
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But Im feelin better now
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That ur in my life

I was all by myself

But you were there to help

When i was out of place

u put this smile on my face
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Chourus
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This feeling deep inside of me
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it opens up my horizons
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and it lets me see
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Everything, good or bad
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And in the end
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I'm just glad
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That your here
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To make this feeling appear
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I'm standing here by myself
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But I'm not really here
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And it makes me feel better

Cause i know in a few hours
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We'll be together


:Chorus


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