Posted by Jeff Johnson on April 11, 2004 at 12:39:45:
In Reply to: Opposites posted by Michelle on April 01, 2004 at 13:42:38:
I got a little carried away here in content - please excuse or ignore it -
the song as you wrote it seemed to lack a kind of focus or storyline
but my version might work in a novel or book - but as a song - I don't think so