Re: Opposites


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Posted by Jeff Johnson on April 11, 2004 at 03:47:22:

In Reply to: Opposites posted by Michelle on April 01, 2004 at 13:42:38:

it's your song with an attitude - great
my version

the rain is so cold on my skin
as my wanton flesh
burns with desire for you

my sun brightens
as your naked body unfolds before me
blinding me

the wettness of your kiss
is bitterness on my soul
yet is pure wonderous evil

I’m in love with you
yet I hate you
I need you
I hate you
yet my loins wan't to ravish yours

::chorus::
You make me so calm
yet my breasts rise up
and scream with fury

You make me so weak
yet an ocean of love
forces me to you

I can feel your musk - your presence
yet you’re so - so far away


: The rain is so cold,
: that it burns my flesh.
: The sun is so bright,
: I can barely see.
: The water’s so bitter,
: yet it tastes so pure.
: I’m in love with you,
: yet...yet I hate you.

: (Chorus)
: You make me so calm,
: that I scream with fury.
: You make me so weak,
: that I’m strong as the ocean.
: I can feel your presence,
: yet you’re so far away.

: I can go on and on,
: but I’ll stop for a while.
: Just to tell you that I hate you,
: but my heart loves you forever,
: I can live without you,
: But yet I can’t seem to breath.

: (Chorus)
: You make me so calm,
: that I scream with fury.
: You make me so weak,
: that I’m strong as the ocean.
: I can feel your presence,
: yet you’re so far away.

: I want to hold you,
: but I want to push you away.
: I want to love you,
: but I want to hate you.
: I don’t know how to feel,
: yet I know everything else.
: I feel I can’t love you,
: but I’d give anything up for you.

: (Chorus)
: You make me so calm,
: that I scream with fury.
: You make me so weak,
: that I’m strong as the ocean.
: I can feel your presence,
: yet you’re so far away.




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