Re: This feeling

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Posted by stefanie on August 22, 2002 at 09:52:40:

In Reply to: Re: This feeling posted by Rich on August 22, 2002 at 09:51:42:

Hey, Rich, welcome back!  Just keep writing... let it flow.  
Keep a diary.  that helps me.  carry around a walkman that
records so that you don't lose your ideas when they come.  
And keep singing!!  I added four more lines to the verse.  i
think it should have four more after that and then back to the
chorus.  I generally make the first verse longer than the 2nd
verse, but there are no rules.

:::I'm sitting Here, all alone
And somethings not right
But Im feelin better now
That ur in my life

This feeling deep inside of me
it opens up my horizons
and it lets me see
Everything, good or bad
And in the end
I'm just glad
That your here
To make this feeling appear

I'm standing here by myself
But I'm not really here
I know in a few hours
We'll be together

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