Re: Tug of War


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Posted by james on August 22, 2002 at 09:39:46:

In Reply to: Tug of War posted by James on August 22, 2002 at 09:33:54:

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There is nothing but hate,
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people are gettin raped,
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smacked in the face,
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this is not our fate.
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This is only a nightmare,
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i am so scared.
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Teach me something besides fear.
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please put on some underwear
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and maybe comb your hair
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Chorus
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But what do you expect from society,
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hate greed and tragedy.
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WHat do you expect from reality,
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Some body help me breathe!
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Verse 2
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Cooperate leaders dening charites,
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nothing but hate greed and tragedy.
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Society lost in the tug of war,
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somewhere between angels and demons,
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screamin......your seein everytihng that is wrong.
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Chorus
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Verse 3
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:i have a penis
it is big
i have a penis
i wear a wig
i have a penis
i dance the jig
i have a penis
can i smoke a cig?

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go go go!
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stefanie of blue number nine's responseThis is pretty bad songwriting, james, plus is not the point of this board. It's called "write a song with blue number nine" and not "Let's all rejoice in the existence of our sexual organs." Plus, I mean, really - this goes with the rest of the song HOW? James with a capital "J" came up with some truly serious ideas, and you couldn't take it, so you had to tell us all about your masturbatory experienes? Two words: PA - LEASE.

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