Re: Hate


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Posted by Kaylee on June 14, 2003 at 19:54:20:

In Reply to: Hate posted by Dave on June 01, 2003 at 16:47:34:

: Verse 1

: He can feel the hate,
: You left him behind and closed the door.
: Now heís left there in this mental state,
: And he will come back to recriminate.

: You think itís funny, you laugh in his face,
: Then you look in his hand, and there it is a gun case.
: His father never locked it,
: Murder is what he came to commit.


You're really creative in the rhyming and use of words department...you seem really smart.


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